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COMMISSION - Sleeping Family by =LuanaTF:iconLuanaTF:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Illustrations > Storybook

©2009 =LuanaTF
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*** COMMISSIONED BY :iconmira518: ***

A tender sleeping family - Nightingale and Perceptor are sleeping peacefully in their double bed, while holding their twins against their chests. :aww:

Coloring this illustration was a nice challenge, which made me grow a lot as an artist =) Thank you Mira518!

Mediums: Pencil, Ink, Photoshop

Ruby/Rose/Nightingale © ~Mira518
Transformers © Hasbro/Takara
Full non-watermarked version of this commissioned artwork has been delivered to the committee. This low quality version is here for show-off purposes only.

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*Darkest-of-Days Jul 4, 2009, 6:15:46 PM
My first time writing a critique. =) I really like how you composed this piece. The way that the children are placed resting against their parents is very natural and really ties the picture together I think. My only real critique for something you can improve is that Nightingale's legs seem a little awkward to me. I feel as though if she were passed out from exhaustion they'd be a bit more loose and not as rigid as they apear in the picture. But that's really minor and I'm just nitpicking a bit. :giggle: Overall this picture is really well done, it's a lovely family portrait and you did a wonderful job composing all of the characters in it. :nod:
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Mood: Wow! ~quickblast Jul 4, 2009, 9:37:49 AM
so cute so i am tacking that he the dad?

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~Coolgirl1314 Jul 4, 2009, 9:37:52 AM
aw cute!

if you want to draw a sence from my TF story then you can!

anyway so cute!!
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=LuanaTF Jul 4, 2009, 9:38:26 AM
Yep he is! ^^

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=LuanaTF Jul 4, 2009, 9:39:09 AM
As I said earlier, I have no time to draw other pictures for people. ^^'' I'm only completing commissions I started, but both commissions and requests are closed now.

Thank you for the compliments! :glomp:

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Mood: Wow! ~quickblast Jul 4, 2009, 9:42:10 AM
o dos he no?

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=LuanaTF Jul 4, 2009, 9:43:14 AM
Of course! XD
You should read :iconmira518: 's stories =) She tells everything there.

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Mood: Sadness ~quickblast Jul 4, 2009, 9:44:55 AM
o but i have i jest have not goten that faer yet

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~Coolgirl1314 Jul 4, 2009, 9:48:00 AM
ops sorry.i forgot

Np.
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=LuanaTF Jul 4, 2009, 10:07:03 AM
Np. ^^
:hug:

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=LuanaTF Jul 4, 2009, 10:07:44 AM
Hey it's alright ^^ No worries. When you have time =) Her stories are just very nice. ^^

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