My first time writing a critique. I really like how you composed this piece. The way that the children are placed resting against their parents is very natural and really ties the picture together I think. My only real critique for something you can improve is that Nightingale's legs seem a little awkward to me. I feel as though if she were passed out from exhaustion they'd be a bit more loose and not as rigid as they apear in the picture. But that's really minor and I'm just nitpicking a bit. Overall this picture is really well done, it's a lovely family portrait and you did a wonderful job composing all of the characters in it.
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“Its a New World... Its a New Start... Its a Life with a Beating of a Young Heart... Its a New Day... In a New Land... And Its waiting For Me... ... Here I am...”
Thank you for displaying the beauty of co-sleeping. I co-slept with my parents and we had a very close bond because of it. What a beautiful thing to do, and an even more beautiful thing to draw, Mommy! I LOVE YOU!
Mandi
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